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		By: Matt Forbeck		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.forbeck.com/2010/09/29/the-tweet-pitch/#comment-50956&quot;&gt;Anne Lyle&lt;/a&gt;.

I doubt most of us will pitch directly on Twitter. However, Twitter has a strict limit and for that reason a useful way of boiling down the pitch to its bare essence. 

I understand your concern about spoilers, and your distinction between a hook and a pitch. Most pitches contain the hook. However, if you can&#039;t come up with a solid pitch without spoilers, then you&#039;re going to have a hard time hooking anyone with your story.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.forbeck.com/2010/09/29/the-tweet-pitch/#comment-50956">Anne Lyle</a>.</p>
<p>I doubt most of us will pitch directly on Twitter. However, Twitter has a strict limit and for that reason a useful way of boiling down the pitch to its bare essence. </p>
<p>I understand your concern about spoilers, and your distinction between a hook and a pitch. Most pitches contain the hook. However, if you can&#8217;t come up with a solid pitch without spoilers, then you&#8217;re going to have a hard time hooking anyone with your story.</p>
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		By: Anne Lyle		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[I can usually boil it down into 30 words or less, but 140 characters is tough - precise vocabulary is not necessarily short. And not every story concept is as simple as &quot;Snakes on a Plane&quot; :)

Also, what if your cool twist is a spoiler? The pitch and the hook fulfill different marketing roles - sometimes you can use the same for both, but not always. A tweet-length hook is a great idea, but I&#039;m not likely to be pitching my manuscript on Twitter. Not yet, anyway!

Still, food for thought...]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I can usually boil it down into 30 words or less, but 140 characters is tough &#8211; precise vocabulary is not necessarily short. And not every story concept is as simple as &#8220;Snakes on a Plane&#8221; 🙂</p>
<p>Also, what if your cool twist is a spoiler? The pitch and the hook fulfill different marketing roles &#8211; sometimes you can use the same for both, but not always. A tweet-length hook is a great idea, but I&#8217;m not likely to be pitching my manuscript on Twitter. Not yet, anyway!</p>
<p>Still, food for thought&#8230;</p>
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		By: Matt Forbeck		</title>
		<link>https://www.forbeck.com/2010/09/29/the-tweet-pitch/#comment-50953</link>

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		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Sep 2010 14:23:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.forbeck.com/2010/09/29/the-tweet-pitch/#comment-50951&quot;&gt;James Wallis&lt;/a&gt;.

Exactly. If you can&#039;t quickly explain to someone why they should buy it, then why would they? ]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.forbeck.com/2010/09/29/the-tweet-pitch/#comment-50951">James Wallis</a>.</p>
<p>Exactly. If you can&#8217;t quickly explain to someone why they should buy it, then why would they? </p>
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		By: Marc_Gascoigne		</title>
		<link>https://www.forbeck.com/2010/09/29/the-tweet-pitch/#comment-51018</link>

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		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Sep 2010 14:14:17 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.forbeck.com/2010/09/29/the-tweet-pitch/#comment-51015&quot;&gt;mforbeck&lt;/a&gt;.

RT @mforbeck: New blog post: The Tweet Pitch http://www.forbeck.com/2010/09/29/the-tw...]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.forbeck.com/2010/09/29/the-tweet-pitch/#comment-51015">mforbeck</a>.</p>
<p>RT @mforbeck: New blog post: The Tweet Pitch <a href="http://www.forbeck.com/2010/09/29/the-tw" rel="ugc">http://www.forbeck.com/2010/09/29/the-tw</a>&#8230;</p>
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		By: mforbeck		</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Sep 2010 14:06:19 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.forbeck.com/2010/09/29/the-tweet-pitch/#comment-51016&quot;&gt;Jamie1km&lt;/a&gt;.

@Jamie1km I&#039;ll be wary and ready.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.forbeck.com/2010/09/29/the-tweet-pitch/#comment-51016">Jamie1km</a>.</p>
<p>@Jamie1km I&#8217;ll be wary and ready.</p>
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		By: James Wallis		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[I used to tell wannabe games designers and publishers that if they couldn&#039;t pitch me their game in a single sentence without commas or conjunctions then their idea was not commercial. For novels I&#039;d relax the conjunction rule.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I used to tell wannabe games designers and publishers that if they couldn&#8217;t pitch me their game in a single sentence without commas or conjunctions then their idea was not commercial. For novels I&#8217;d relax the conjunction rule.</p>
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		By: Jamie1km		</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Sep 2010 14:04:35 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.forbeck.com/2010/09/29/the-tweet-pitch/#comment-51015&quot;&gt;mforbeck&lt;/a&gt;.

@mforbeck Someone&#039;s gonna call this a Twitch, and they should be punched in the throat.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.forbeck.com/2010/09/29/the-tweet-pitch/#comment-51015">mforbeck</a>.</p>
<p>@mforbeck Someone&#8217;s gonna call this a Twitch, and they should be punched in the throat.</p>
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		By: mforbeck		</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Sep 2010 14:01:22 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[New blog post: The Tweet Pitch http://www.forbeck.com/2010/09/29/the-tw...]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>New blog post: The Tweet Pitch <a href="http://www.forbeck.com/2010/09/29/the-tw" rel="ugc">http://www.forbeck.com/2010/09/29/the-tw</a>&#8230;</p>
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